Wednesday, April 9, 2014

My addiction

Dear: Donkey's Ear.

I have _____  health problem.

I started smoking when I was 18 years old, now I'm 46 years old, my doctor sad me to stop with cigarette, I wanna stop, but it's very difficult for me, because when I smoke, I feel better, but my doctor sad I'm not good on the inside.

I'm addicted, what do you recommend for me ____________?

Flipflopchanel in Boston.

Dear Flipflopchanel,

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