My addiction

Dear: Donkey's Ear.

I have _____  health problem.

I started smoking when I was 18 years old, now I'm 46 years old, my doctor sad me to stop with cigarette, I wanna stop, but it's very difficult for me, because when I smoke, I feel better, but my doctor sad I'm not good on the inside.

I'm addicted, what do you recommend for me ____________?

Flipflopchanel in Boston.

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Worst day of my life

Dear: Donkey's Ear

My girlfriend broke up with me after one year.

So, I went to my friend's party, and I met a beautiful girl, and then she said I'm handsome and she had liked me,  and then we have stayed together all night, but someone took a picture for us, and sent it to my girlfriend.
The next day she broke up with me, now I'm lost, because I love my princess, I want her back, but I don't know what to do, I'm unhappy without my princess.

Please help me with some advice.

Fliflopchanel in Boston.

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Low Salary

Dear: Donkey's Ear,

I have a problem on my career.

I'm a very professional pilot, I have worked hard for 4 years like my colleges pilot, but my colleagues' salary is more than mine, because my salary is the same as when I started working in this company.
So I'm very upset with this problem and it is very boring.

Please advise me, what should I do now?

Flipflopchanel in Boston.

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• incorrect spellings are highlighted in green
  

shoulder pain

Dear Donkey's Ear

I am an university student. I finished a military service 3 months ago.
I exercise regularly in a gym.

One day, I felt pain in my left shoulder. At first I thought that it was temporary pain.
But the pain continued all day. So I don't exercise, I have a lot of problems
I think reason _____ that I was in a military, I always sling a rifle on a left shoulder.
It effects my left shoulder.

I feel inconvinience in daily life. I don't know how to cure my shoulder.
Please help me

Shoulder patient in Boston

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• awkward structures are highlighted in yellow
• verbs in the wrong tense are highlighted in purple 
• incorrect spellings are highlighted in green

Donkey's ear

Dear Donkey's ear

I'm 53 years old. Recently, when I was running, sometimes I was choking.

I have been smoking _for_ about 30 years. I guess, if I stop smoking, I _get__ feel better. I have tried to stop smoking sometime, but didn't.

Could you suggest _for__ me how to stop smoking.

Heavy smoker in Tokyo.

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Low Salary

Dear: Donkey Ear
I have a litter problem in my career.

I'm very professional pilot, I have traveled for 3 years as another as pilots, but my salary is the same when I started.
So I'm unhappy in this company, because it make me down.

Please advice me, what should I do now?

Unhappy in Boston.    


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confused getting job

Dear Donkey's Ear

I am a university student who is ready to get a job.
I have great grades in my major field of study. I am also good in English.
I will graduate university in this year.

But I am worried about getting a job. Recently the world economy is worse and
Korea's economy is worse too. So there are few opportunities to get a job.
I don't have confidence that I will be success to get a job.

There are not enough information to get a job.
I don't know what I should study or achieve more.
May I ask for you some advice?

Troubled in Boston


Dear Troubled in Boston,

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• Information is singular, not plural, so "There is not enough information..." 
• Do you mean "what I should study to achieve more"? Please ask about this.